Console the fear

Console the fear

A Poem by Tandin
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heart break

"

If those things were right where it used to be,
i dont need this anger and those unseen love to see,
coz what you make of me at the end,
are pieces of shattered glassed that i had mend.
I may have given myself to this alien world,
and ferry to another heart coz what you lost have been sold.
Heartless cries are hard to hear,
and when death steps near,
love can still wait and consold the fear

© 2015 Tandin


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Very touching and sad indeed, very emotional to and heartfelt, not to mention heart breaking since it is about heartbreak.
I like the rhymes you have to.
This was a nice poetic way to describe heartbreak.
Great write :)


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tandin

8 Years Ago

thank you review more of my poem..and thank you for your time..appreciated
cimmy wuv xxxooo

8 Years Ago

Your welcome :)
WOW! Heart-Touching and Sad.. Love it! So true!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 26, 2015
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Tandin
Tandin

Sarpang, gelephu, Bhutan



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I am 20 years old I have completed class 12 and I am creative I guess more..

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