Youv'e Scarred me

I have a song with this its called Scars by Papa Roach really great song! You should look it up!

 

I love you

I loved you

You hurt me

 

I believed in you

I trusted in you

You broke that

 

You drank

You got angry

You got mad

 

You had lost yourself

Who you truly were

I was scared for you

 

That look in your eyes

That crazed look

It haunts my dreams

 

You got out of control

You got aggressive

We had no choice but to call authority

 

Yet you come back free

I don’t know how to feel about that

Did you deserve it?

 

I don’t know any more

I don’t know who to trust

I don’t know who to love

 

It feels like the world is on my shoulders

It feels like a never ending darkness

It feels like hopelessness

 

Ive started to give up, loose hope

Ive tried so hard to forget

But its etched in my brain

 

That crazed look

That angry look

It haunts my dreams

 

No longer dreams

Now nightmares

All because of the one I love

 

Im scared of you

I don’t want to be

But I cant help it

 

I still love you

But im still scared of you

You’ve scarred me

 

No longer happy

Not that I ever really was

No longer carefree

 

Flinching at people yelling

Scared of people who are angry

You’ve done this to me

 

I love you

But I hate you

You’ve scarred me

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This poem highlights many of your skills as a writer. The imagery was haunting and the flow was spectacular, but I'd have to say that your unusual style of repetition was what made it so special for me. I found it to be rather violent. It hurts to face our sins and each stanza felt like being hit multiple times. It never let up. It was like a shower of frustration raining down on me. You hit us over and over with fierce emotion. I cant describe how powerful this work is. I am in awe.....

[tanaya]

Thanks :3 That means a lot to me :3

[ATG]

Another great poem from you. I'm starting to sense a theme with some of these poems which makes them feel more genuine, more from the heart.

[tanaya]

Thanks :D

[tanaya]

The 'theme' would be my life

[ATG]

I understood that. I was referencing the common theme between this poem and the last. They seem related so to speak.

[tanaya]

Ah ok they are actually hahaha I wrote my latest three poems at the same time

[TheKaylaPup]

I'm glad you can use poetry as an outlet to all these feelings. I hope things get better soon. Remember they always do eventually. =)

[CHRIS ANDES]

every word molds an emotion
this is true
=]

[Perfect Mistake]

Very well written, your writing is so amazing to read i love it! Anyway great work :3

[olla]

well done.. it is good that you write and your writing is good..

[Jyango Ryudo]

So much emotion was pouring out of every pore in this poem. Made me want to give you a big hugs! Great job Hun keep it up :)

[Maximillion]

alot of pain and emotion just pored out in this poem very good i loved it

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Oh, the confusion...! These emotions are so painful, and you portrayed them very well. Great poem.

[Shy Girl]

Goodness...this just tears me up inside to think this is going on or has in your life. I'm without words here as to how I feel about the poem it's self...I was just so caught up in the happenings and emotions you covered this piece with...I guess the best description is ANGER...lots of ANGER. :)