I hide myself

 

Hiding cuts

Hiding scars

Hiding emotions

 

Behind my veil

Behind my mask

Behind my covers

Are my scars

 

Behind it all

I am scarred

Emotionally and physically

 

Hide myself

Away from the world

Away from myself

 

Who am i?

What have I become?

I don’t know anymore

 

Help me

Help me find myself

But you cant

 

No one can

I am lost

Broken

 

Give up on me

Everyone else has

Your no different

 

I am worthless

I am pathetic

I am nothing

 

Wast of space

Wast of breath

Wast of life

 

Throw stones at me

Throw knives at me

I don’t care

 

You cant find me

Not in this house

I hide myself

Author's Note

Please comment!!

Reviews

[Secret Valentine]

i like this. i understand how u feel. Im the same way

[tanaya]

Thanks...

[Twistedme]

T-T all the emotion is so saaaddd buuut....i enjoy them in a way....;o like your other works this one is well written :D you have now obtained my interests and il stick around to read the works you make in das future :3

[tanaya]

Yeah they are.. Im glad you do... Thanks!!! Hahahha glad I did and am looking forward to your comments! Thank you!!

[Twistedme]

Awesome xD

[Diablo-Doom]

very beautiful

[MoriartyMesa]

The feel of punk rock mixed with broken mirrors and glass makes me think this rocks harder than nine shots of whiskey with nothing in between,

[Shelley Holt-Lowrey]

Breathtaking. Are you sure you are only 15? The emotions are right on track, but your expression of them are beyond your years. Old soul. That's what I see in you. A very wise old soul. Bravo!

[Mockingbird]

i can empathize with the first three lines of your poem. i used to feel like that and hurt myself. i had low self esteem. there is nothing anybody can say to make it better. this is a profound poem. it's very personal sounding.

[GreenAngle]

WOW! Tears stream down my face as i read, i don't think I've read a more expressive poem, it's very touching. Hope your okay =)

[KT]

Beautiful...I love it. :)

[jimmy]

The older you get, the more difficulties show up in your life. You just have to find a way to cope with things, and in serious cases, it's cuts and scars.

I truly wish I could help you, because I don't want you to hide yourself, at least not from me.

Most times I wish everything in people's lives were okay, normal.

This poem is simply another one of your great pieces of writing. Good job, once again.

[Charile]

Wow. I loved it. Great job.