Because of you, I hate you

 

Twisted holes

Burning pits

Fiery heart

 

Is this how it is

Is this how its going to stay

This is hell

 

Get me out

Let me go

I want to leave

 

No more haven

No more peace

All destroyed

 

Yelling

Shouting

I've had enough

 

Give me release

Give me an escape

Give me my life back

 

Every decision

Every choice

Effects us

 

You make these mistakes

You make these choices

You ruin our lives!

 

How could you

You do it so callously

As if you don’t care!

 

You say you care

You say you love us

Then why do this?

 

Sinking in depression

Seeking attention

Becoming violent

 

You have made us this way

We have lost ourselves

Because of you!

 

I

 

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Author's Note

Please comment!

Reviews

[lovejulez03]

As usual, beautifully done. Great piece and a great way to show the emotion :)

[Dove]

In my opinion this poem is really good. So many emotions were potrayed here. Fantastic. Emotionally powerful!

[CHRIS ANDES]

i was driven =]

[Shelley Holt-Lowrey]

Oh beautiful gifted girl. You have pulled on the heartstrings of so many here. Look into the mirror these people (below) are holding up. In it you will find a vision of you that you may not have seen before. There is so much more here than your darkness. Darkness gives in. You fight back with vehemence. Strong, talented, beautiful girl of light hiding under a cover of night. Your light can no more be extinguished than your voice can be silenced.

[jimmy]

Emotionally powerful along with holding a strong point; Tanaya, this poem is really great in my view.

[paradise]

very interesting write great job consistant with the main point and had alot of good emotion :)

[Charile]

Wow. Love it

[Sophie]

I think this is my favorite of yours!!!! I love it!!!!

[No name]

strong emotion portrayed in the these words, nice write.

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong words and a lot of emotion in this poem. Sometime we must face the truth and anger is the only way. I like the strength in the poem and the very nice ending. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote