Please daddy, Don't go

 

Centre of my world

Stronghold for me

My dad

 

You have been there for most of my life

Through the good

And the bad

You have been there

 

We all make mistakes

We all do stupid things

But I don’t care

I love you

 

I need you

In my life

And in my heart

 

Daddy don’t leave

Daddy stay here

Daddy I miss you

 

Mummy forgive him

He has done some stupid things

But mummy please forgive him

 

Daddy I love you

Daddy I need you

Daddy don’t go

 

Forgive and forget

Its in the past

I love you no mater what

 

So daddy I need you

Daddy I love you

Please daddy, don’t go

Author's Note

This is about when my parents split up and how even though daddy made some mistakes I still love him...

Reviews

[lovejulez03]

A love for a parent is something that will never go away.. you wrote your feelings well and I know that so many people can relate to this

[KT]

Awesome poem. It's almost impossible to not love your Dad...Great job!

[bobby]

Sometimes parents stay together and displace their pain. But in the end they all(family) realize the pain was always there.

[Rose of Gondor]

:( Simple, but very emotional and sad. This has touched my heart. :) You must have a very special relationship with your parents. :)

[Kenneth The Poet]

Simply put. You write about your pain really well.

[Cassie Fraga]

yes!! very deep with saddness... no better way to express then in a lyrical write... well done!!

[Shy Girl]

The hurt that a rift in the family can cause, never seems to mend. You may forgive but what about the rest of the family members?? Don't you think they were hurt as well?? (Just in a very different way) You expressed this hurting you felt and still are feeling extremely well. The sorrow from your words bleeds out within each and every line. Wonderful job here :) I am so sorry this happened to you

[olla]

this is very heartfelt.. well written..

[ATG]

A very sad, but interesting and well written poem. The tone was great and made me think of someone much younger saying these things. There were a few flaws admittedly, but they didn't bring down the overall poem.

[No name]

I really feel it, my parents split too. You can forgive but you never truly forget. You expressed your emotions well and you know it came from the heart.