Abused and Mute
A Book by tanaya
© 2011 tanaya
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Ann has lived with her abusive dad for 6 years. She has been beaten and starved not to mention she's mute. She is a loner at her school untill the new boys come in town and her father has left her alone in the house with them... What will become of the absued mute girl? Thats the blurb and please comment and tell me what you think! Thanks XD
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There is much to work with here Tanya and too much to guess at.
Sick and Twisted - is this why her father left her with the boys? What is the intention here?
School - She is beaten & starved. Thinking perhaps institution rather than school. You could do much with the structure, rigidity, rules, etc.
Sounds dark. Keep keep writing. You are strong and powerful with it.
Shelley
Posted 12 Years Ago
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ohhh!!! can't wait to read!!! post soon!
Posted 12 Years Ago
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Added on December 13, 2011
Last Updated on December 13, 2011
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tanayaWyoming, NSW, Australia
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Hi! My name is Tanaya Smith :) Pleased to meet your acquaintance :)
I am 16 in year 11.
I live in Australia.
My natural hair colour is blonde but there were to many sterotypes along .. more..
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