Being on your own is the worst thing that can happen to anyone. Just remember, life will always get better, and once the storm is over, when the clouds depart and the last of the rain fall, you'll find the sun again, and then the sky will be bluer than you remember, and the sun will shine brighter. There is always hope, because in every dark tunnel there is light at the very end. So you just gotta hold on and brave the world until you get to that light.
A really good poem so full of raw emotion. Hope things get better soon.
This was a really good piece. This went up in 2011, I'm hoping things have changed for you. As far as the poem itself, I really enjoyed reading it. Keep writing!
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Nope nothing has changed...
11 Years Ago
I'm so sorry to hear that. Depression is a dark hole. It never feels like there is a way out, but no.. read moreI'm so sorry to hear that. Depression is a dark hole. It never feels like there is a way out, but nothing, not even the horrors of depression, lasts forever. Nothing on this earth is made for forever, except our souls.
The work takes the reader by his or her neck shakes them about and than say's
"DO YOU UNDERSTAND NOW" and I like that, nice sobering wake up for the reader.
Feeling alone is one of the worse feelings in the world. I have experienced it first hand so I do know how it feels. This poem captures that feeling perfectly. It was a great poem overall.
Before I was diagnosed as a paranoid anti social depression sufferer I too hid my true feelings from all behind a mask of smiles and forced laughter, now with meds and understanding I move forward one day at a time and it is not always easy I have set backs and days when I too feel engulfed. But we must keep trying because the people we were are out there somewhere waiting for us to find them because no one else can. Keep your chin up and keep em' coming
Sadness and sorrow that dive into the core of our souls is always sad and yet it so cathartic to write about it.. I think you've described it perfectly... depression is hard to explain for those who suffer and hard for those who don't to understand..xx
Most people hide their emotion. Good to write them down and try to lose the bad stuff and live for the new day. No-one had a easy life. Good to think and re-set dreams and goals. Thank you for a excellent poem.
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