Deal With The Devil

 

I was walking in a dark room and couldn’t see a thing, not even my hand right in front of my face. I wondered around somehow knowing I would not hit anything. One moment I was in the darkness then it was like all the lights were turned on. The light blinded me and I had to shield my eyes and wait for them to adjust to the light.

 

The room was circular and had doors everywhere. It was all white and glowed as if alight. I wandered around the room testing all the doors only to see them locked. I went back to the middle of the room and sat defeated. Thinking about how to get out of here I heard a whisper of a voice. Hope returned I tried the doors again but this time I listened to the doors trying to see what door the sound came from. Standing still and listening I heard the mysterious voice again except this time coming from the door right in front of me.

 

I hurried to the door and pressed my ear against it trying to get part of what the person was saying, I only got small parts of it.

 "she's coming… it cant wait… you’ve got to… stupid prophecy...kill her...Lucifer's fault… innocent girl...eadens mark...if we must...get Jake" I ran from the door after that frightened about what they were talking about. One of the men had seemed angry but the other seemed calm. There was something going on and it was dangerous, also Lucifer had a part in it wether he knew it or not. Running to the first door I saw I just thought 'open up you stupid door!!' and BAM it opened. You have got to be kidding me I thought as I ran through the door.

 

Looking around me I found myself in a room that I would never of even dreamed of. The room had swirling colours all over, to tell the truth it didn’t look like a room at all just like I was hallucinating and was in a whirl pool of colours. I started staring at what I thought to be the walls and was hypnotized by the vibrant colours, leading me further into the room, making me forget everything and all my worry's. I was stoped suddenly by a commanding voice

 "STOP Melissa" the voice sounded familiar and as I struggled to remember it I felt a pull further into the room it soon wiped my mind of all thoughts but to keep moving in this room. I heard a voice again and this time I actually listened to it. Thinking about the voice I suddenly remembered everything that had happened to me; the killing, the kidnap and Lucifer. I was more awake now and looked around for the door and saw it was to my left but closed. I tried to remember how I opened it before and just thought 'open' and miraculously it opened. I started running back but heard the voice again fainter this time.

"Melissa that’s the wrong door" I had to strain my ears to hear it but it was already to late. I had opened the door and in my momentum flung myself into the room, realising to late that there was no white room but just darkness and nothing. I had fallen and expected to meet the ground but instead kept on falling into the dark. I let out a long terrified scream and was answered with nothing. I kept on falling trying to reach out to grab onto anything to slow down my fall but was met with nothing but air.

 

I hit a soft surface and bounced a bit. This was defiantly not the ground as I stood up I felt a wave of dizziness and nearly fell over. The last thing I saw before blacking out, again, was a young mans face.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A wild chapter. Your description took me to some confused places. I like her desire to find direction and some light. A very nice ending to a very good chapter.
Coyote