Lost at Sea

The sun shining down in this ocean of blue

My thoughts far away, thinking of you

On this raft far away, lost at sea

My thoughts whirl about you and me

The waves rock me to and fro

I wish that you could know

My heart longs to cry out from within

Hiding this from you, it feels like a sin

I wanted to tell you, I wish I could

I want to tell you, I know that I should

I wish I could tell you, but im lost out at sea

I have drifted so far away from thee

I reach out but yet I cannot touch you

My hand just seems to pass right on through

I grasp only the salty air out here

The sky so bright, blue and clear

Then dark clouds appear and hide the day

They make me shiver and shy away

It rains and the sky begins to cry

And in this darkness so do I

My cheeks red and rosy from my tears

I fall into the ocean, swimming with my wildest fears

The waves fling me around and it becomes hard to breathe

I watch the raft slowly leave

Here I tread freezing and alone

My hair wet, wind whipped and blown

Everythings blurry and it becomes harder to see

Im sorry that I never told thee

For now I know I am truely lost at sea

Reviews

[RedInk524]

Makes me think of the common crush from a youth's perspective. They gain so much feeling and attatchment but never the strength to speak! All the while those who do find that stregnth are crushed by reality that gives them often their first shock of a failed thing they dared to call love! Unfortunate.. And so they are all lost in a see of daydreams and wingless hopes.

[StoryTailor]

Nice~
It was descriptive and clear.
I liked the pattern and the beat.
And the story it told was tragic (Sadness indeed)-- but beautiful too.