And it Steadily Bloomed

Dreaded flowers, steadily bloom

In a bloodied array of impending doom

How could something so peaceful

Cause something so dreadful

Blood and sweat cover the floor

Death everywhere, I dont even want to be here anymore

The yellow rose which bloom caused this

Stained red with blood from a misplaced kiss

The yellow rose, so tender and sweet

caused so much bloodshed it begins to weep

Once it bloomed, its beauty was tainted

The yellow rose, has now been painted

In a deep and crimson red

Thanks to all of this needless bloodshed

Dreaded flowers, steadily bloom

In a sorrowful array of impending doom

How could something so delicate

Cause something so malevilant

 

 

 

Reviews

[Fragilebrokendreams]

Dark yet slightly enchanting. Well done I like this.

[Crow]

I find a bright light in your subtly dark imagery.

A refreshing style.

[roy mccarthy]

dark write,
but it flows well!

[RedInk524]

Oh wow, this is amazing. A very unique feel to this, it looks like soemthign that would be found in some old poetry collection. A very symbolic and dark piece that just spits in the face of reality. Going into favorites.

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wow this poem was really the opposite of what i expected hmm this acutally shows the meaning of the beast in a beauty. great poem :)