Rain in Her Eyes

Tears will not make the pain go away

Music in, up high and loud

Sunshine comes through as you hide from the day

Sitting alone making not a single sound

Is it better to try to forget the pain

Or remember all the good times we had

Memories of spinning and laughing in the rain

Come now and again making me sad

The pain and the hurt filling my heart

Now I stand here alone Drenched and Cold

Waiting for Cupids little Love Dart

I just want you to hug me and hold

Arms wrapped around my waist

Just like we used to do

But you were in such a Haist

And you let me fall through

Why did you let me go

Why didnt you hold on

Now im falling so very low

To the point where im almost gone

And no one will notice or even care

About the little girl, so unaware

Sitting in the rain in the town square

Rain in her Eyes, Although they're really Tears

and Even after all these Years

All she can do is Smile

and Ask him if he wants to stay awhile

Trying to bring back the memories

Brushing back some clarities

Trying to recreate the Past

Bring back what was never meant to Last

Slowly but surely he walks away

Leaving the girl alone and gray

Theres a little girl, so unaware

Sitting in the rain in the town square

Sad and tired of hearing so many lies

She Sits There,

Rain in Her Eyes

 

Reviews

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powerful and so strong! "rain in her eyes" what a great way to phrase it and you have great stanzas as well. awesome!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Love the description, it is so vivid it allows the reader to feel the emotion! Great Poem

[Evermist]

I like it a lot the details are great and a nice feeling on how it all goes togather

[RedInk524]

Wow, really sad. I like the descriptive details, it better portrays the melancholic atmosphere. Favoriting.