Embrace Me in Gray

Once Your Gone

Im Alone Once Again

Alone in this Empty World

Once You Walk Out that Door

It Shuts Behind You

Leaving Me Behind

Slamming it in My Face

Tears Streaming Down

My Flushed Red Cheeks

Head Filled With Guilt

Heart Filled With Hurt

Terrified of What Happens Next

How Do I Forget You

How Do I Move On

I Do Not Know

Nor Can I Fathom It

I Fall To My Knees

Hands Cover My Face

My Vision Blurry

When Your Gone

The Pieces of My Broken Heart

Still Seem to Miss You

I Still Remember That Day in the Rain

I Can Still Feel the Pain

I Trusted You

I Believed In You

And You Let Me Down!

Your Broke Me Down

Broke My Heart

And Let Me Drown

You Embraced Me, With Torture

Sometimes There is Only One Way

Clouds of Gray

Cover the Sky Above

And The Sky Cries With Me

Hiding the Pain i Truely Feel

Embracing Me in Gray

Embracing the True Me

Leaving the Old Me Behind

Leaving You Behind

Along With All The Memoies

Of What We Used to Be

Of What We Once Were!

Reviews

[Legacy]

Hiran ( Scarlett Orchid),

Now, I really, really enjoyed your play on words, in this write. I have the hunger of a broken heart and the willingness to go forward and keep the peace, despite the famine.

A beautiful rendition of love-gone bad - tragedy, as I always say, breeds the best poetry.

Contemplating on ~ have we all danced in the rain with the one we convinced ourselves that was meant to be? Have we all been broken this way by the one person we thought to stay forever beside us?

The pieces of my broken heart still seem to miss you... how powerful is this?

You embraced me with torture, holy crap, who would have put it that way?

Just all in all a beautiful write, maybe right font would make it stand out more, because the person is leaving.

I must say, you have a great piece here.

Thank you for sharing,

Legacy

P.S. I feel like this should be in Poetic Infusion Society's contest Love, only if you have not yet entered into any of them.

[.Em.]

This is a nice piece. Some typos but that's alright. I like how you connect with nature. You find the sky for solace,