Torn

I don't want to feel this anymore
I can't just sit here staring at the floor
I love you, but I don't want to
It kills me to keep on pushing through
I'm slowly dying from the inside out
I just want to scream cry and shout
Everything I do, I do for you
My heart now broken, torn in two

Reviews

[misha]

This is a great poem of heartbreak and love. Keep it up!

[Calissa Knox]

This poem perfectly portrays how it feels to be in love with someone who gives nothing in return.

You put so much emotion, vivid imagery, and depth into such a short poem. Great write!

~ Feather