Stary Nights

Listen to these thoughts as they crowd my head

Lean against my chest and listen to my heartbeat instead

Listen to the rythme, the steady beating tune

The first rays of light always come too soon

The moon is high above us and I want to hold you in my arms

The way you look at me, you just kill me with your charm

You understand me better than anyone else I know

How could I ever agree to let you go?

I look up at the stars at night thinking of you

and wonder if you're looking up at them

and thinking of me too.

 

Reviews

[SyberRose]

Sweet Poem and bittersweet thoughts...SyberRose

[Mary Christabel George]

Short & decent filled with love "Starry Nights" & i guess it has two r's :)

[written in blood]

very sweet!!

[quinfinn]

lovely poem but, Starry has two r's.....very elegant write though.

[RedInk524]

Another unhappy poem of heartache. I certainly hope that this does not reflect a true feeling of pain in your sweet heart! It is quite troublesome and difficult to adjust to when the playing of one's heart's strings suddenly stops and there is only silence other than the faint nostalgic echo of the previous beauty. Excellent job in capturing this.

[krish]

har kuch.....means outstanding....i liked ur writng way coz...i liked who follos such wayss................
"STARY NIGHT,WHEN I'LL BE STANDING AT UR'S SIGHT,
WE 'LL SEE ALL LIGHTING;S IN STARRY- NIGHTS,
WHEN U MAKE ME FLY WITH UR'D LOVELY WORD'D FLIGHT,
I 'LL FEEL SO PRIDE,THAT I'M WITH U IN THIS STARY-NIGHT....+..TWINKLE'S STARRY-RIDES.........."

[s y e]

Wow! Beautiful!

[Jordan's Back]

This piece reminds me of the song "Somewhere Out there" From "An American Tail."
Its Romantic, yet Somber and wanting needing, and longing. Its truly a master piece.

[Abdur Raqeeb]

Great description of the scene. This transports the reader to an imaginary world. Good write.

[Craba]

I really enjoyed reading your words,
A beautiful read