A convenient dream

A convenient dream

A Poem by Kioumarsi

Last night I had a dream I was in it.

It truly was flying! I wish the sky wasn't blue, and that people had wings.

There was a line of people, a queue! 

I heard, so many people are choosing to be born. It was fair!

Africa, Asia, Europe or America

Black or white.

Tall or short.

And every one had a reason for that, trying something new like wanting to have sex with different colors. I met a king who wanted to be born again, to be a rebel and an angle who wanted to be born in Africa for the first time. 

A decision and it was so difficult, you want to try it all.

“Just something new, it has a gamey taste, a wild flavor”. I heard someone whispering about life.

I heard they are choosing to be born.

A place

A life

And a new beginning

We were asked for it!

To be blind, crippled and crazy!

My mind, my poor mind was trying to justify everything; but, but it wasn't true. 

Like an orphan boy who makes stories about his father.

And who knows? I asked myself. It must? It must not be a truth! Maybe, not the truth, but a part of it! just a convenient story! And it was…I quest it was fair!

© 2012 Kioumarsi


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A very interesting dream. Dreams are the highways to real life. People desire more or less. I like the description of the people wanting to be someone else. The realistic ending made the poem complete. A excellent poem.
Coyote


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kioumarsi

12 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by & nice comment. Regards, Kioumarsi



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What a dream... it's so weird

Posted 12 Years Ago


Kioumarsi

12 Years Ago

:)
Rhianne Ney

12 Years Ago

;)
A very interesting dream. Dreams are the highways to real life. People desire more or less. I like the description of the people wanting to be someone else. The realistic ending made the poem complete. A excellent poem.
Coyote


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kioumarsi

12 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by & nice comment. Regards, Kioumarsi
Hey Kioumarsi, I Iike your unusual ideas here. I wonder which colour is the best sexual partner? Sadly, perhaps life being fair will only ever be a lovely but strange dream.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kioumarsi

12 Years Ago

Thank you for the comment. Yeah, unfortunately ..., but who knows? Regards, Kioumarsi
You are a fantastic poet! :) I was really moved by this piece. I hope to see more just like it soon :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kioumarsi

12 Years Ago

Thank you for your beautiful mind.
The Nude Writer

12 Years Ago

You are very welcome! :)
nice poem , good job

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kioumarsi

12 Years Ago

Thank you. I would really like some comments to improve it.
TheAdamBryant

12 Years Ago

i am sure that many other people will comment soon and they will have an idea about what u should im.. read more
Kioumarsi

12 Years Ago

Thank you again.

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