Climax

 

Noise makers make noise

climaxing at midnight's breath

lipstick and champagne

Reviews

[poetic soul]

uhh!! classy this was!! :)

regards,
poetic soul

[Salvatore Buttaci]

I like the way you used the two metaphors of lipstick and champagne for love and celebration!

Sal

[The Scanners See Sound]

Champaign? I thought it was champagne. Well, whatever.

As far as haiku go, I suppose this is fairly decent. It got the point across, and I suppose you can find deeper meaning if you interpret things a bit more symbolically; presuming any deeper meaning is intentional.