Rippling Haloes

Rippling Haloes

A Poem by Tammy

Rippling Haloes
by Tammy

Sitting alone at the edge of a lake
watching as a dragonfly
gently lights upon the tranquility,
disrupting the continuity of stillness,
causing the mirror to dance
with rippling haloes of shimmer
across the vast openness
shattering the serene reflection
of sky meeting sky

© 2008 Tammy


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I really like your descriptive language on this one, very lovely indeed. In fact, i can imagine myself as the dragonfly. My favourite stanzas include, ''watching as a dragonfly gently lights upon the tranquility disrupting the continuity of stillness'', i really get a feel for this place, can easily picture the dragonfly, ''causing the mirror to dance (how wonderful!) A mirror dancing-what a visual! ''Rippling haloes of shimmer''...'' sky meeting sky''.
Absolutely wonderful, you've transported me with ease! Thank you

thank you very much for your review, much appreciated!


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very nice

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like your descriptive language on this one, very lovely indeed. In fact, i can imagine myself as the dragonfly. My favourite stanzas include, ''watching as a dragonfly gently lights upon the tranquility disrupting the continuity of stillness'', i really get a feel for this place, can easily picture the dragonfly, ''causing the mirror to dance (how wonderful!) A mirror dancing-what a visual! ''Rippling haloes of shimmer''...'' sky meeting sky''.
Absolutely wonderful, you've transported me with ease! Thank you

thank you very much for your review, much appreciated!


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A scene I have watched many, many times, and was enthralled as you also are. I spent half my youth on the creek banks, fishing, swimming, or just watching nature. Thank you.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very nice!

i like the imagery of the scene you sketch with your wonderful words of nature here.

Art

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 18, 2008

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Tammy
Tammy

Beckley, WV



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Born and raised in Southern West Virginia. I'm a frequent contributor to several online and print poetry magazines. I love writing poetry. Painting pictures with words that tickle the imagination. I.. more..

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