Solitude

Not sure exactly what this is classed as.

 

So,
Once again I'm alone'
Lights off,
Inside I'll stay,
The trust is gone,
Unforgiving silence,
Dark thoughts consuming,
Endless and safe, solitude.

Reviews

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Great use of brevitas, the whole poem looks like a series of flashes, very cool :)

[Alex Falkner]

Thank you, it's not one of my best works, I'm more caught up in stories and books, I've been doing a bit of poetry to get my flow back.

[外人 (Gaijin)]

I admit, i hardly ever read stories, it takes too much time to read'em and i'm a bigger fan of poetry xd

[Alex Falkner]

I usually just check out poetry to see into the mind of the person writing it, it's my way of finding out if the person is interesting, there's a lot of poetry I read but don't comment on because it doesn't catch my interest.

[外人 (Gaijin)]

Makes sense but remember that things that catch our attention - when it's up to poetry - are the ones we can relate to, my french teacher says our favourite poets are always the ones we can better relate to ;)

[Alex Falkner]

Exactly.
:)