Strawberry of lies

Strawberry of lies

 

Behind those darkened eyes

Devils dancing in a strawberry of lies

Living a dreadful life what a freaking surprise

Angels having a porn scene the same applies

Walking crazy kissing the ones you love goodbyes

 

Rich still full in debt

True love so hard to get

Maybe wasted on a hot brunette

Trying to remember still all you forget

Lost in heart between her lips and your sweat

 

With all this sorrow and joy

I remember my self as a little boy

Broken with a dream I will never enjoy

Memories of a soldier treat me like a broken toy

Still a soul to fight with something none can destroy

 

Now with my eyes closed

Fighting, losing to an evil I apposed

Numbed feeling no pain the brain too dozed

A silver bullet through the heart, a weakens exposed

I close my eyes in rest an ending I my own have in-closed

Author's Note

wrote it just not, kinda wasted, enjoy

Reviews

[A.r. Bazian]

wow...
the imagery and the feelings are amazing!
the Poem as a structure isn't the best you're written, but when it comes to the feeling and thoughts expressed and revealed are strong!
VEry strong!

Keep 'em coming bro

[Bubo]

Interesting and thought provoking, I felt sad reading this, a need for love, debt, and looking to the past of innocence .

[Katseye]

Not bad, needs some prof reading. The emotions come through well.