Don't cross the line

For the ones you love!

Don't cross the line

 

In this world of the strong survive

Failing is never allowed

True to their love I stay alive

Carry their scars high and proud

Somethings you simply cant deprive

 

I wont fight for a believe from above

I wont even kill for you to be proud of

I will only die for the ones I love

 

If them you try hurting

I could turn on the world in a fire

Watching it burn while smiling

Feeding my anger and desire

Crying out watching you dying

 

You can call me a rebel

A terrorist for blowing up your angel

Call me a devil for sending you to hell

Could you imagine

For a memory so many could die

A hunger of a passion so fine

No care of how many souls their freedom I buy

For the ones I love, just don’t cross that line!

Author's Note

Just a small thing I managed to write while at work, hope you like it.

Reviews

[YouoweYoupay]

You can go as far as any one could imagine when it comes to protecting the ones you love. I like the sound of the title it has this sense of a sharp warning. I also liked the line: (Carry their scars high and proud) Good write. Thanks for sharing.

-Wella.

[...]

i couldn't imagine
before i read your words
they are so profound
medication for the nerds

for those you love
this is a really great deal
for those you don't
there's not much to steal

you are who you are
and you are awe-inspiring
those that don't agree
we'll fix their wiring

. yeah, that's what i think ... :) ... there are some breathtakingly beautiful moments in this poem but my favourite one is ...

Could you imagine
For a memory so many could die

[Katseye]

Wonderfull as usually my dear!

[A.r. Bazian]

a hunger FOR passion so fine...
i suggest that!

this is great mate! seriousely! amazing!