Love and Crime

the muse hit me today and this is what I came up with

Love and Crime


Your lips so sweet and tender
For you I will fight and for you I will surrender
If love is a crime then crime is what I will do
I'll assassinate the president even an angel too


I'll Take the bad, make it good for you
Baby I will even shoot down the blue
Judge and jury I don’t care let them sue

I am your bullet, I am your gun
You are my beautiful loving sun
Love and crime, together we are fun


When you smile
Your lips heaven I find
If you cry...
I'd rather be in hell tonight


I am your bullet, I am your gun
You are my beautiful loving sun
Love and crime, together we are fun

Forever always until the bitter sweet end
I will be a lethal gun by your side
So Baby just speak out your mind

I am your bullet, I am your gun
You are my beautiful loving sun
Love and crime, together we are fun
...  Together we are fun


We are not scared
One cop, two cops
Send a whole SWAT squad
With our guns together no tear drops


I am your bullet, I am your gun
You are my beautiful loving sun
Love and crime, together we are fun

I am your bullet, I am your gun
You are my beautiful loving sun
Love and crime, together we are fun
... Together we are fun

Author's Note

It's a simple piece, I had lots of fun writing it,
So I hope you have fun reading it too

Reviews

[emmajoy]

To fight on behalf of love seems a contradiction of emotion but you express yourself so beautifully in this poem that it's difficult to disagree! To love so much is powerful, it inflames and ignites amazingly strong feelings ..

'I am your bullet I am your gun You are my beautiful loving sun Love and crime, together we are fun ... Together we are fun ' .... fun and bullets.. .. hmmmm; for some reason that made me smile ..

[J. Marc]

I totally agree with Tigra, this is a song and you should propose it to some agent as such. „I am your bullet, I am your gun“ this triggers so many sweet mental images....!

[alan khan]

poems like this that just flow are eaasy to read and a joy to read. awesome job.

[Tracie Skarbo]

Again I see this one as a song...great job with the strong imagery...

[Wicahpi]

interesting set of verses...chorus, too.
i see/read this in a lyrical way. whimsical and fun

[deeps]

I agree with Emma on this write. This is just plain amazing write here. I like this.

[Ellen Hammond]

Some very intense emotions flowing through this write. I one reading it struck me as a Bonnie and Clyde theme, and in another as someone so devoted he will do anything to please his love. Very well written. I did enjoy reading it.

[Coyote Poetry]

When love is good. We will fight for it. Poem is very good. The story in your words is strong and full of powerful lines leading to a very good ending.
Coyote

[Alicante lullaby]

very passionate,,,shows the dark,savage aspect of love,,,not that same,old,boring,angelic,lovey dovey feel to it,,,,shows how immersed you are in this passion so overpowering,,,good or evil,,,

[shadadakiya]

wow i love it that was awesome the best one ive read any where in a long time a wild way to decribe how much you love something or some one thats deep!!!xo