Disappear and reappear� Disengage and reengage

Disappear and reappear� Disengage and reengage

A Poem by TamerQtaish

 

Disappear and reappear… Disengage and reengage

 

<Softly Spoken>

Metal and rust

Smoke and dust

The guidance of the warrior ghost

Whispering controlling you like a host

 

<Kicks In Fast>

Disappear and reappear

Striking them down with fear

Your screams the enemy will hear

Disengage and reengage

Pushing them into a deadly cage

Your actions filled with twisted rage

 

Your body and soul stolen

The sign of the wolf scourged

Holding the secrets of the fallen

Into battle you have been forged

Your armor scratched and broken

 

Disappear and reappear

Striking them down with fear

Your screams the enemy will hear

Disengage and reengage

Pushing them into a deadly cage

Your actions filled with twisted rage

 

Your sins judged forever guilty

There is no more forgiveness

Protecting the gates of insanity

Die alone that’s your sentence

You're hunting to find your infinity

 

Disappear and reappear

Striking them down with fear

Your screams the enemy will hear

Disengage and reengage

Pushing them into a deadly cage

Your actions filled with twisted rage

 

Your sweat and blood mixed

The flecking eyes losing sight

Breaking the chains of the dwelled

Into the skies of the lost you fight

You're searching for things not found

 

Disappear and reappear

Striking them down with fear

Your screams the enemy will hear

Disengage and reengage

Pushing them into a deadly cage

Your actions filled with twisted rage

 

<Solo>

 

Disappear and reappear

Disengage and reengage

Disappear and reappear

Disengage and reengage

<Fades Out>

 

© 2008 TamerQtaish


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Wow, this is f***ing awesome dude! Been in a metal kind of mood lately, and your song just blew me away! I wish there was a group that could play it, this would hit the top of the charts.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very good flow!
the music comes with the soul of this piece!
a bit of a thrashy heavy metal scheme/type of music!
personal feelings and individuality appears strongly!
and the presentation of Vendetta!

overall, i love it!
very good piece!
keep it up!

love and respect!



Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very well done... i cant pick a fav part... awesome song!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

first of all, jade calls u "tam" now? lol i thought tht was my nickname! anyway tamer this is a really awesome poem and i love the ending ! ur repetition is a true talent ;)


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

and crazyyyyy word choice! where do u get ur ideas frm lol and by the way ur email is like totally surreal, explain parts of it to me!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

really really well done and i love the first part, the way u rhymed it, it all works out and when u used "disappear and reappear" several times throughout, good consistency tam
J

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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