Open heart surgery

Open heart surgery

A Poem by TamerQtaish
"

Once the heart fails! Emotionally not physically....

"

 

Open heart surgery

 

"Nurse: Doctor… can we save this one?"

"Doctor: I don’t know! It looks pretty bad."

"Nurse: open heart surgery?"

"Doctor: that might be our only hope!"

 

<Music start>

I am too old to love again

I am too young to live alone

Trapped inside your pain

Trying to replace what is gone

Words echo through my mind driving me insane

 

Cut it off let it die

So the body can survive

Open heart surgery

Make me strong to stay alive

Open heart surgery

… Yeah, cut and slice

 

You say you have no regrets

Staring madness this was just a test

I am tired of giving you my best

A rusty sword you pulled from my chest

Wearing my jacket using me as a bullet vest

 

Cut it off let it die

So the body can survive

Open heart surgery

Make me strong to stay alive

Open heart surgery

… Yeah, cut and slice

 

Thinking you are the light

I never knew the truth of your might

I didn’t see your bullet cutting the night

Weak I already started to lose my sight

I thought you were the strength of my right

 

Cut it off let it die

So the body can survive

Open heart surgery

Make me strong to stay alive

Open heart surgery

… Cut and slice… Cut and slice

 

"Open your eyes"

See between her crimes and lies

"Open your eyes"

See straight through the clearest skies

"Open your eyes"

See right through the screams and cries

"Open your eyes"

"Patient: what…"

"Nurse: he is waking up!"

"Doctor: What! Give him another shoot."

 

Cut it off let it die

So the body can survive

Open heart surgery

Make me strong to stay alive

Open heart surgery

… Yeah, cut and slice… cut and slice

<Music fades>

 

"Nurse: Doctor, you think he will survive?"

"Doctor: I am not sure… We did the best we could."

© 2008 TamerQtaish


Author's Note

TamerQtaish
This is a over a year old, I will admit its kinda funny, as i was half wasted writing it! I simply took the emotional pain of my heart back then and turned it into a physical surgery, adding the Nurse, the Doctor and the patient as 3 different characters from within me! every character symbols a certain thing! And NO don't ever kill your heart! I was just trying to kill my pain, so please people dont take the wrong message about this piece of lyric...

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Ohh..this is ur best poem!!!..But i am curious..why ur heart was in pain an year ago?!

Posted 16 Years Ago


It reminds me of the Cancer video by My Chemical Romance, but instead it adds a campy sort of element to the mix, excellent job

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

o wow...half wasted and this good? now i RLLY wanna knw wht ur capable of. jeez, this is realllllllly good! and omg, everything is just perfectly ordered out and well said. ;)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very lyrical and deep, the connection the the hurt heart to a physical heart..........thoughtful and
creative ........the need for surgery, to take out the pain.........thought provoking.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

man this is ages old!
Your trying to but old things, well put your good old stuff, not that this isnt so good, its just you have so much better of this, just a thought anyway, and yes its a deep way of turning ur pain into a story!

I love it, not as your true good ones, but none the less you amaze me

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 13, 2008

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