Me and I in a fight

The fight within and its embrace!

Me and I in a fight

Midnight calls
As the moon light shows
Memories inside this head
Its time to wake up the dead
A memory inside this mind
An everlasting dream by my side
…
Hide my secrets well
Exposed and I will dwell
Dreaming of heaven dancing down in hell…

Creepy noises in the night
Open eyes shout for a sight
Sins and deeds the wrong of right
The struggle of me and I in a fight

Nothing lives here
Only the shakes of fear
Everything washed so clear
Whatever was is gone
Crashing melting into one
Burning flying into the sun

Creepy noises in the night
Open eyes shout for a sight
Sins and deeds the wrong of right
The struggle of me and I in a fight

Evil lives even if it sleeps
A twisted dagger before this kiss
A lot of sins underneath these lips
Yesterday is a million years away
So there is no sorry not even a worry
Sinless deedless until… today

Creepy noises in the night
Open eyes shout for a sight
Sins and deeds the wrong of right
The struggle of me and I in a fight

Flashes of my forgotten past
Hit my mind like a bullet fast
An ugly image so hard to grasp
…
"My ghosts crawling threw the walls"
"My demons rising to reclaim their souls"
Still holding on so here it goes
Cold sweat underneath these bones
Heart pumping bubbles into the holes

I refuse to be
A memory while I still breathe
I refuse to be
A soul that lost the will to live
A whispered ghost that never leaves
I refuse to be
I refuse to be
I refuse to be

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Author's Note

This is like 2-3 years old! I founded somewhere in my PC so i posted right away, its not my best not my worst, but don't we all have that fight from within?

All the best,
Tamer Qtaish

Reviews

[Mz. Rosilyn Vanessa]

In my heart and soul I truly loved this powerful and amazing piece. People in all walks of life fight this very same battle and they are afraid to admit it. I am not afraid or ashamed to agree. This battle for me has ragged on long enough and I feel that must Jesus and Angels to left me. Again, from my heart and soul I truly loved this powerful piece.

[emmajoy]

' Never fear the battle between s elf and self, tis the co nscience and courage of a brave man.. dk who wr ote that or similar but, does it matter, means s omething!

These are p owerful words and phrases and they rattle along like a heart's furious throbbing.. it's sad but not sad, a mix of fear of losing self a nd soul but looking for the stre ngth to carry on..great em otion, great write.

[Dark Daughters]

I agree we all do have our own fights within ourselves

[ShadowDance]

This is kinda old I remember it well tho!
hmmm... your fights don't only rage on streets and within the world of companys but also deep within your self, beautiful way of putting it, proud of you posting this one, showing a bit of weakness one might say, but i think you show true strength of spirit with posting this one

[Belinda Rice]

i really like this alot very inspirering you have a good mind for writing hope to see me add me some time...

[Jade]

this is rlly inspirational..like it a lot

[jenny]

really nice work...

[JC Fox]

yes we do have a fight from within, great poem I liked it and you'll probably be surprised at how many people will actually agree.

[LoKi]

good work , i liked the title and the words they have deep meaning
i loved it :)

[A.r. Bazian]

the conflict arises from the Title!
direct in a way... but tells a story hidden within the lines in another!
nice!