Fade and fall

Hope, past, present and future!

 

Fade and fall

 

Your scars are a colorful reflection?

Everyday feels like a court in session

You're past and future what a defection!

Everyday passes by like a painful injection

…

Dirt on your boots

Blood stains stain your jeans

This is the same old you

So what if black turned into a darker blue?

 

Kill insane a murder of pain

Close your eyes maybe it won't come again

Your mind filled with partial fragments

Your memories keep coming back like flying bullets

 

Tired of being alone

You're not made of stone

With your eyes flipped within

Struggling to survive maybe that’s your sin?

 

Kill insane a murder of pain

Close your eyes maybe it won't come again

Your mind filled with partial fragments

Your memories keep coming back like flying bullets

 

The world is ugly and wrong

Still this is where you belong

So will you stand up tall?

Or will you just fade and fall? … Fade and fall

Don't you fade and fall

Don't you fade and fall

Author's Note

Another piece about hope and other things attached to it in my personal point of view, so it might be a bit confusing for some, but the message is simple, don't you give up!

Reviews

[A.r. Bazian]

i have no idea how i missed this... somehow i did!
i guess like bullets that go right passed you!
dude... u rock!
nothing more to say

[John Stussy]

I know this message well, and have seen what can happen to those who do give up. Memories attack, emotions bombard logic, and scars can open again into fresh wounds. But nature itself says we can't stop progressing. The weak perish, the strong survive.

[ShadowDance]

Your scars are not that cool! just kidding! But there is only so much the body and soul can survive!
So again, try to stay out of trouble! Come on your my best friend, your my brother, and plus who would drive my kids crazy if not you?

Stay safe you promised...

Now about your writing as I said back then, what do you eat before you sleep to come up with this stuff?

[jenny]

suzy is right, it definetely draws u in...nice job!

[suzy]

So what if black turned into a darker blue? that's deep! pulls you into the scene. amazing write
Your mind filled with partial fragments, so very true..

[Jeannine Saadeh]

very raw and real. i like the images u used and ur very creative with ur words. good job ;)

[JC Fox]

It is another wonderful piece and you convey your message beautifully in the words.