You're sweeter than any of their angels

Thats to my angel!

 

You're sweeter than any of their angels

 

I woke up tired

Searching grounds for a friend

Ghostly whispers talking about the end

…

Duck and run behind the darker blue

I found my ground and that friend is you

No one knows how to hold me like you do

 

Dancing with devils

To touch the heavens

Calling us sinners

You're sweeter than any of their angels

 

I woke up restless

Seeking answers for my loneliness

Screaming voices calling bitterness

…

Duck and run behind the darker blue

I found my answers and that lover is you

And no one knows how to love me like you do

 

Dancing with devils

To touch the heavens

Calling us sinners

You're sweeter than any of their angels

 

…

 

Baby… We had our lucks

And we had our blues

Some people use love to abuse

Other people never love cause they don't wanna lose

You and I love cause we chose… And we chose!

 

Fighting day and night we endure

A devil knocking on hells door

Better than an angel dancing on hells floor

 

Sometimes it feels so far

Like the fading of a star

Other times it feels so hard

Like the footsteps on shifting sand

 

Fighting day and night we endure

A devil knocking on hells door

Better than an angel dancing on hells floor

 

Always and forever

Fighting to be together

You and I will never surrender

In the darkness of the night your face I remember

 

They call us sinners

Are we the ones being devils?

They say we won't ever see the heavens

You're sweeter than any of their angels

You're sweeter than any of their angels

Author's Note

Simply A song of hope for my angel... Always and forever!

Reviews

[ShadowDance]

I love when your in love!
Your eyes just shine with joy, I know you too well! I knwo things are tought for you two right now, but deep down I have a good feeling about this, Dont ask me why, this situation seems crazy when you face the facts, but hey we went through hell and back and here we are, you guys can do it and I am with you till the bitter end bro...

She seems like a real angel, keep her safe bro
And stay out of trouble!

[PureSyn]

Oh how beautiful...and a very lucky angel she is. This flowed ever so tenderly, yet full of passion. I would love to hear this set to music. Simply Stunning!

Nicole

[jenny]

sweet, bitter and so true..i love it

[A.r. Bazian]

romantic!
you're both lucky!
love is a bliss!
the words are from the heart... the sarcasm and the comedy gives a certain simple favorable taste!

good work!

[Jeannine Saadeh]

very nice poem. i loved the way u contrasted both angels and devils and ur chorus is very original. good work and i look forward to reading more of ur work ;)

[THE BLACK SEAL]

hey i dug it. it was pure and sweet yet with a tinge of irony. those true friends we hardly ever seem to cross paths with

[JC Fox]

I agree with Misa wonderful job, the imagery was great and it was the perfect harmony of good evil and just all around not too lovey dovey.

[Misa]

oh, this is lovely....
beautiful rhythm, and the images & messages get across quite nicely. the repetition of the two - choruses, for lack of a better word - works out quite well for me, sort of like twining around itself. (fors ome reason that's how l pictured it as l was reading.) you've got quite the ability to write songs here, l think - l envy you in that, because l could almost feel the beat to it as l read. Nice job, and l don't understand songs in the least so l'm going to leave it at that.