You and I my friend

The title says it all!

 

You and I my friend

 

Failing friends are we now!

This is what it feels when you're falling down

Your blood red never brown

Still alive so stand up and grasp your blazing crown

…

I see the thunder falling

I feel the monster crawling

Wake up wolf this is the end of your sleeping…

 

The streets stain red

Gun powder and lead

Restless cold until the end

Here we stand you and I my friend

 

As I surrender my body to the wind

Closed my eyes opened for a blink

A kiss I remember and my heart starts to bleed

The touching of skin and hope starts to sink

…

Covering armor of steal

This pain will never heal

Killing for peace, a devils deal!

 

The streets stain red

Gun powder and lead

Restless cold until the end

Here we stand you and I my friend

 

As I look outside my window

There's a ghost waiting me to follow

Swiftly flying while it sings me sorrow

It consumes me for its freezing breaths I swallow

…

The silver sky of stars

The evil within their hearts

As the days pass us like scars

 

The streets stain red

Gun powder and lead

Restless cold until the end

Here we stand you and I my friend

Here we stand you and I my friend

Author's Note

Only two months old, this piece is for a friend, a friend who also invited me to this site...
About the piece its self, it was written the day you my friend were nowhere to be found!
With all the strength given to me and all I tried you seemed lost! Not knowing if I'll ever see you again, none the less... You turned out to be a tough fighter your self, love and respect brother...

Reviews

[A.r. Bazian]

love and respect brother!
fighter... aren't we all?
mate you should know... you gave me wisdom, and courage... you gave me life after death!
you my friend... are the one who remains true!
you my brother... are my shield!
i will never be able to repay you!

love and respect!
take good care!

[shadadakiya]

wow that was really a great write true friends are forever because you can't lose something you never had great craft.

[ShadowDance]

Wait a sec this new and I didn't read it!
oh ok I think I know which friend you talking about, and man you never failed anyone if that's what you mean at the beginning and yes you spit blood for friends and even stranger

Just one question how much more blood can you spare?
Aren't you the one who says chose your battles wise and don't make too many enemies at once?
Just think about it, but next to that, WOW you amaze me man!

[John Stussy]

Powerful write, telling of the things a pair of friends have gone through. A friend of mine and I can really relate to this extremely well. No wonder you are top writer, you are one great poet and lyricists, and I'll be damned if someone says you aren't a real writer!

[jenny]

really dug it...respect all ur works...keep impressing us!

[Jeannine Saadeh]

i love it! not only cuz i value friendship, but the way u describe the relationship between the 2 people...wonderful..