My Dark Darkness

My Dark Darkness

A Poem by TamerQtaish
"

Lost into darkness...

"

 

My Dark Darkness

 

<Spoken Softly>

"Oh my dark… darkness"

"I am lost in your sadness"

"Oh my dark… darkness"

"I am lost in your madness"

<Spoken Loud>

"I'll rain destruction upon this land"

"I'll steal your path from destiny's hand"

"Darkness I'll be your slave until the end of sand"

 

<Music kicks in>

The reconstruct of my flesh

Twisted ugly into the wings of death

A burning gaze for truly this is my birth

 

Lie and steel

Do what you feel

Murder and kill

Do your wicked will

I surrender my soul to your will

 

How could I leave you my darkness?

I knew even angels couldn’t save my madness

I'll let it consume me, I am better off with my sadness

 

"As further the sin"

"As better the green"

"As darker the light"

"As sweeter the night"

 

"And now, I truly know who I meant to be"

"And now, I stand still killing the light as you see"

"And now, I understand which side is meant for me!"

 

Lie and steel

Do what you feel

Murder and kill

Do your wicked will

I surrender my soul to your will

 

Lie and steel

Do what you feel

Murder and kill

Do your wicked will

I surrender my soul to your will

 

My dark darkness

My dark darkness

<Fades>

© 2008 TamerQtaish


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Yeah....I can relate to giving into the sadness...madness...darkness. Sadly enough, most of my best works comes from when I'm deep down in it. I had to embrace my darkness to become one. How can someone be whole if they deny they are made up of light and dark? Of course, spending too much time in the dark can be deadly....when enveloped in either the dark or the light one makes the other invisible. Which is I suppose why we all teeter between the two....so we may evolve properly. good tune...I like it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You wrote it, but you never sold your light, I was there remember!

Let go of the past bro! just let go...

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

pain!
goose pumps!
darkness!
amazing!

really good job!
personally... one of your best!

love and respect!
always and forever!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow..just wow.. the words r creepy and tense and u created a unique way of creating this "world" of darkness.its as if we can really feel what ur going thru in a way.really well done.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ok, I think I know when u wrote this one,
Ok I dont want you to go back there! but you told me you write it do it wont stay within, beautiful bro
Once again great writtings :P

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 27, 2008
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TamerQtaish

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