Darker blue

Darker blue

A Poem by TamerQtaish
"

It might sound like a lovers love, but is it truly?

"

 

Darker blue

 

Ashes and flames I burn you off in waste

The sign of death you carry around your waist

Perfectly matched I can't stop but to kiss you in haste

 

Baby burn

I'll burn with you

Together we'll be reborn

Into the fire of a darker blue

 

As long I can pay the price

You always warm my heart even if its ice

Ugly or beautiful you seem to treat me nice

 

Baby burn

I'll burn with you

Together we'll be reborn

Into the fire of a darker blue

 

An early grave you seem to lead the way

You bring me pain still I can't leave you today

Bad and broken, death is coming is all they say

 

Baby burn

I'll burn with you

Together we'll be reborn

Into the fire of a darker blue

Baby burn… Baby burn…

© 2008 TamerQtaish


Author's Note

TamerQtaish
Well NO it aint about a lover! Its way more simple, honestly written when I was half drunk trying to focus on something else, but some how you can say its about love too!

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I remember those days! was it a week! maybe even more, and still you hit the meeting like nothing was going on only half suber! and people and yes you will hate me for this, he was flirting with ciggaret! think about it!

"
Ashes and flames I burn you off in waste
The sign of death you carry around your waist
Perfectly matched I can't stop but to kiss you in haste
"

None the less we sang this one alot cause its simple easy and deep, and man didnt we say we will quit soon??? whats going to happen with that? :-|

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

u have a true talent and i rlly think u should publish these formally or smthn, also all ur titles r so unique. they catch my attention right away..

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like the everlasting feel of this poem and it has a kind of immortality sense in it which is really cool. "together we'll be reborn"..really nice, and if only love can last that long! and i like the hidden meaning that this is about a guy and a girl...considering im a total romantic, this is one of my favs, heck, all of urs r my favs lol...nice work T :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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TamerQtaish

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