Evil things (VERY OLD)

Evil things (VERY OLD)

A Poem by TamerQtaish
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We all have our evil! The question is! would they take over us, or we over come them?

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Evil things

Verse one

where the first battle starts within our hearts
A battlefield made of your deeds, and now you are planting seeds
Don’t you fear, don’t you go a way cause you wont be the same

Can’t you feel, and hear the sound
Evil things are creeping around
There is something in our mind, that tells us when they come alive
Still we never let them die, cause we just love their mind

Pre-chorus

“Come to me while I come to you.”
“Come to me while I come to you.”

Chorus

Evil things
Evil things are creeping around
You try to scream but you have no sound
From the walls they come to you
From the cracks you left behind
What will you do, will you hide

Verse two

Evil things
“Evil things”
“Where the first battle starts within our hearts.”
Evil things come to me, I say lets go for the ride
And now I stand all alone, like the ruins all has gone before
They whisper they, tell me what to do, evil minds consuming my soul
Planting seeds that will never grow, creeping down this ground it wont go around

Now you are like the ruins that stand alone
With a broken soul, there is no longer hope
There is no way to hide they, enter your mind

Pre-chorus

“Come to me while I come to you.”
“Come to me while I come to you.”

Chorus

Evil things.
Evil things are creeping around
You try to scream but you have no sound
From the walls they come to you
From the cracks you left behind
What will you do, will you hide

Verse three

Evil things.
“Evil things”
“Where the first battle starts within our hearts.”
Evil things come to me; I say lets go for the ride
And now I stand all alone, like the ruins all has gone before
They whisper they, tell me what to do, evil minds consuming my soul
Planting seeds that will never grow, creeping down this ground it wont go around

Can’t you feel, and hear the sound
Evil things are creeping around
There is something in our mind, that tells us when they come alive
Still we never let them die, cause we just love their mind

Pre-chorus

“Come to me while I come to you.”
“Come to me while I come to you.”

Chorus

Evil things
Evil things are creeping around
You try to scream but you have no sound
From the walls they come to you
From the cracks you left behind
What will you do, will you hide

Evil things
Evil things
Evil things

© 2008 TamerQtaish


Author's Note

TamerQtaish
Well this is the oldest I posted till now, its kinda rough, but its going I guess

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i like it!
you had it in you... the wrath and anger!
it shows developing skills and elevation in style since this writing! compared to yu amazing new ones!
keep it up!
i like!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yeah Evil things, you worked alot on this one, its very old people,
with working hard I mean you totally but your mind into it, which made it diffrent from all other from the sense of how you even took time to make a verse and churse and things like that which I still dont know what exactly :P
exmplain it to me as much you want, your self didnt know what they were exactly untill a year and a half ago!

Love you bro

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

tam, this is very deep and i actually took the time to read it more than once cuz i believe tht a lot of us have this side in us, this "evil" side that wants to come out sometimes and it all comes down to temptation and whether or not we can fight it. a lot of it has to do with our mind and i just completely am drawn to this one....

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 27, 2008

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