An angel's kiss

A bit of romance twisted with life and its ups and downs!

 

An angel's kiss

 

Born in heaven fallen into hell

Still I try to end things well

With dancing devils or falling angels

Baby I am running out of favors

 

I am the twilight wolf

I am the midnight ghost

 

Blood stains over the nails

Even worst then my own tales

As evil and good always fails

Still I need an angels kiss

To save these cursed devils lips

 

Dressed in black full of sin

As I used deception to win

And all the scars over the pain

All is gone nothing left to gain

All the days went down the drain

 

Blood stains over the nails

Even worst then my own tales

As evil and good always fails

Still I need an angels kiss

To save these cursed devils lips

 

All the religions still I wonder

Angel of death came as a hunter

Asked me to go six feet under

Still I vanished out like a thunder

Cause never a slave or even a soldier

 

I am the twilight wolf

I am the midnight ghost

…

I got nothing to give

Nothing more to live

I got evil inside, evil outside

And I don’t care about what's walking behind

…

I am the twilight wolf

I am the midnight ghost

 

Blood stains over the nails

Even worst then my own tales

As evil and good always fails

Still I need an angels kiss

To save these cursed devils lips

Oh yeah… still I need an angels kiss

 

From dust to dawn here my story ends

As I whisper softly into the winds

 

I am the twilight wolf

I am the midnight ghost

…

I am the twilight wolf

I am the midnight ghost

…

I am the twilight wolf

I am the midnight ghost

(Fades out)

Author's Note

This is kinda old! None the less, its a weird reflection of how I see my life some how, plus my best friend kept calling thats you the day he read it 2 years ago or something...

Reviews

[...]

... wow ... you have an extremely unique way of traversing the dark alleys of the mind ... there is so much at play here ... so many factors and dimensions ... "dancing devils" ... "twilight wolf" ... "midnight ghost" ... "an angel's kiss" ... "evil and good" ... "deception" ... and these lines are just startling ...

All the religions still I wonder
Angel of death came as a hunter
Asked me to go six feet under
Still I vanished out like a thunder
Cause never a slave or even a soldier

... and then these lines ... the submission is so melancholic ... ravishing poetry ...

I got nothing to give
Nothing more to live
I got evil inside, evil outside
And I don’t care about what's walking behind

... you achieve much profundity with a simple vocabulary ... very inspiring ... and then these two lines just take this journey to a place of imprisoned silence and isolation ...

From dust to dawn here my story ends
As I whisper softly into the winds

... my head is spinning ... this is really powerful introspection and brutal ... and the skillful usage of poetic expressions and their uniqueness strikes one with great force ... i surrender ... i think i cannot read another potent verse from your universe of verse today ... both the writes i read are so potent and so thought-provoking that i shall pause ... reflect ... absorb ... and then return to your universe of verse ... to be drawn again into this tussle for clarity of thought and action ...

[ShadowDance]

Hi bro,
I remember the first day you showed me this!
As back then, WOW
You truely put your life on paper,
about "Asked me to go six feet under" arent they now 7... remember 2-3 months ago?

I always got your back Tamer
Best friends forever

[jenny]

what a sweet title!and the plot of this poem is amazing...good 4 u, u have some skills!

[Jeannine Saadeh]

first of all, i want to say that i agree with a lot of stuff in this poem because it does show a reflection of urself, but i know for a fact ur not as evil as u make urself seem to be. and not to be all mushy and emotional, but ur the total opposite of :
I got nothing to give
Nothing more to live
I got evil inside, evil outside...u have a lot more potential than u give urself credit for and i sure hope u knw why ur still living. this might reflect at a certain point of time in ur life, but even so, ur SO WAY NOT evil, not even bad. ur too humble in ur poems tam!!