ahoy there!

Matey!

Living life can be oh so fun

what with all its wonders!

So join me now come everyone!

and join me with me plunders!

bein' a pirate ain't easy ye see

ye must be strong a smart like

ye deal with scurvy and de ocasional flea

an knock all day kids of day bikes

Ye bes finding treasures in unlikely spots

unless the X do be marked for ye

yarr then ye know der be lots!

and of course a sharer ye'll be

cuz if'n ye be findin some gold

ye'd better be sharin wit me

i do be a pirate and although imes old

i can still cut ye in tree!

so join me now on adventure we go

livin life as a pirate like me

and as long as ye stick wit me ye kno

dat ye'll be livin life free!

Author's Note

hahaha writing like a pirate... now all of you know I'm the hippest dude in town :D

Reviews

[Seraphic]

Not bad. Depicts the lust for riches but not the obsession with the sea. The tone is informal but i don't see any pirate slang like "aye" and "savvy". Good work.

[nothingnothingforgetfor..]

Haha very fun read great work.

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Love it ; ) Yo Ho Ho and a bottle of rum me matey ; )