Flimpk

Words in place.

Catamaran
    ultra-ban
        summer fan
            sweaty hand

Bonny hunk
     railroad funk
          deep drawer junk
               fragrant skunk

Mesmerizing
     metal ring
         birdies sing
              weekend fling

Driving home
     circle Rome
         telephone
             Al Capone

Pillowed heap
    counting sheep
        hear them bleat
            off to sleep

Author's Note

Think nothing of it.

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Certainly a stream of consciousness bit of rhyming! I could almost hear it being recited out loud to a funky beat! I liked this rhyming. Lydi**

[Tam Warink]

Yes, that's pretty much all that it is too and yet the individual experiences that each reader brings with them tend to provide that unique backdrop of interpretation that yields the varied response we see in each of the associated reviews. It's nothing short of universal intrigue in my opinion.

[Angi]

I had to think something of this, Tam. I needed some nonsense to make sense of the stuff I have been reading and skipping over today. Fun, fun stuff and that ain't no junk. Angi~

[Tam Warink]

Thank you very much for reading, Angi. It seems like you might have felt a bit compelled, in one sense or another, to "make sense" of it. If there's any truth in that then I have to wonder why. In my opinion, a vast majority of what everyone writes is ambiguous at some level. It's really hard to make sense of any of it most of the time; certainly that's how I look at my own stuff. Oh well, again, thank you and I'm happy if it distracted you from things more ponderous. :)

[Angi]

I do tend to want to know what a thing is. I also know that will cause migraine's while reading poetry. It is a work in progress. Your poem here gave me a brief respite and also whispered that it doesn't have to make sense to make sense. (If that makes sense) Distraction was the key and I thank you, Tam. Angi~

[rutherford]

Great word play. Reminds me how fun language can be.

[Tam Warink]

Thank you, kind sir! The little birds are most encouraging. ;-)

[Frieda P]

Haha, this was great fun to read, muchly enjoyed! ;-)

[Tam Warink]

Frieda! OMG... my head is spinning; dizzy rats fall upstairs, combing hares. Poor little rare bits of review fare in laurel sauce. I thought this day was perfect and complete and then you showed up! Thank you, so much. :)

[Frieda P]

Hahah now you've made my day!! Was a pleasure, really...I smiled throughout. :-)

[Pryde Foltz]

Sounds like a day for the diary. Great tale.

[Tam Warink]

I'm stunned! ...is this tag team reviewing or cosmic random chance? Either way my day is totally and completely made. Thank you so much for your time and for readind, Pryde! I'm happy that you enjoyed it.

[Pryde Foltz]

My pleasure.

[SyberRose]

Cute one...a fun read tam...Rose:)

[Tam Warink]

Thank you, SyberRose! ...glad you enjoyed it and kind of you say so too. How on earth did you stumble on this obscure corner of the cafe? Was it on the "never been reviewed list" or something? ;-)

[SyberRose]

haa...Just lucky I guess...i remember you...we have met before.:)

[Tam Warink]

oh my... so senile and so soon. Alas!