Shiny Moonlight Eyes
A Poem by The Turk
 A simple Haiku about an infant 
Shiny Moonlight Eyes Lazily going asleep Woken by the sun
© 2012 The Turk
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Like I said very simple but makes the beautiful eyes of infants that much more adorable
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Reviews
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So cute! :D
Posted 11 Years Ago
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aww this reminds me of my baby brother :3 infants are so innocent and cute! great job :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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Innocence prevailed. Simplified in the stanzas. Amazing how you brought it together and left the reader knowing just where you stand on your amazement. Write on
Posted 12 Years Ago
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The innocence both protects and endangers. Not that reading this haiku will convince anyone of that... Nice write!
Posted 12 Years Ago
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Added on October 8, 2012
Last Updated on October 8, 2012
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The TurkVirginia Beach, VA
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I'm a 15 year old boy and I love to write and get all my emotions out. A huge problem for me are brain farts. It usually take a long time for me to get out of it. I hardly think that my writing is any.. more..
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