Utopia

Utopia.

Paradise.

Perfection.

Creator of Hope, 

Man's Heaven and Goal. 

Utopia knocks on hearts,

Utopia plays her role.

A perfect actor,
She often performs. 

Fabrication.
Deceit.

We are but her puppets;

Crumbling Figurines. 

 

Author's Note

Another quick one, just to get the hang of it. I still feel that my lines sound a bit forced so I could work on that. Anyway, thank you for reading.

Reviews

[creative Marie]

No way, this poem has given me an entire new view on the idea of Utopia. At first glance I saw your description to be contradicting to the word Utopia in its self. but really you are right, to try and maintain perfection is to break the ying apart from the yang and fall into corruption.

I'm kind of writing a story that relates to its topic called "The Legends of Aquar" The entire story is strung from the creations of the Witching sphere, and how beauty and life is always at conflict with corruption and death.

[Utopia]

Thank you for the kind comment, that's what I was aiming at. At first glance, people strive to make the perfect paradise for themselves without thinking about just how much they're losing along the way. Utopia may seem perfect but it hides many flaws made by us. Utopia doesn't have to be a place, it can also be our own mind.

I have always been a fan of those type of stories and I'll make sure to read your story. Good luck with your future work!