She

Another free verse, it's not the best, it may not be in a great format, it doesn't matter, but I thought it was okay. I just wanted to express things that shouldn't exist any longer.

She waited

She waited for you 

She waited near the setting sun

She waited in the unforgiving wind

She waited all by herself

She waited

It was okay though

It's okay with her

She remembers things

She is trying

She is trying to be great

She is trying to be someone

She doesn't want this anymore

I think she will stop soon

She is to keep going

She wants to forget

She will forget

She is done with that hoping

She will continue to hope

She is trying to forgive

She thinks to herself

She isn't afraid

Afraid of the moment

She stopped

She has dreams

She has hopes

She has the same abilities as you

She thinks

and thinks

and she thinks

and she thinks

I can't

I cannot

It's because she hopes

It's because she can stop

It's because she knows what she wants

That she blanks

she cries

she laughs

she is done with that envy

she is done with your pity

she can be joyful

she can be annoyed

she is something

she is the moon

she is the stars

she is the sun

she is the world

she is the universe

she is everything

she thinks you're great

And yes

She stopped waiting with the tears that became a lifeline

Reviews

[fern]

Wow i never thought I'd feel emotion for a piece of poetry but this took my breath away.

[aspen]

my favourite line is "And yes
She stopped waiting with the tears that became a lifeline". This piece is very nicely written, i look forward to reading more of your work.