Thoughts for Now

Thoughts for Now

A Poem by Talfox
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"Is it fine?"
I think if I wait a while I'll forget
I don't want to forget though
I cannot
The meanings are different
I am relating them to life
I want to stop
I will stop
I have
I couldn't speak a word then
It's starting to change
I'm going to change
I'll listen to you
I will not forget
I want to see things
I want to feel more
I don't know if this is right
I'm starting to think
"Is this what I should do?"
I should stop
I won't stop with these changes
I will not stop with these changes
I think this is going great
It will
It has to
I keep worrying
I am not to be worried about
I guess I shouldn't worry
This is okay
It needs to happen
My emotions aren't fulfilling
I want to keep reading
I don't want to be angry
I'll try not to be angry
With the things that I've done
"Have I only given sorrow?"
I hope that you'll think about me
I hope that you're not sad
I'll try to speak more
I've been trying to help
I will put the past behind
Let us look forward 

© 2017 Talfox


Author's Note

Talfox
Sorry if it doesn't make any sense to you. I guess it makes sense to me.

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Good writing becomes whatever the reader needs it to be... And this is excellent writing, my friend. The way you crafted this is amazing. And I especially loved the flow and rhythm. I love the way it becomes a bullet like rhythm like at the end of the second stanza. That was very creative. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Talfox

7 Years Ago

Thank you! ;)



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I agree with both comments below. This does become whatever the reader needs it to be and it only has to make sense to you. I enjoyed it and thought it was very well written.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Talfox

7 Years Ago

Thanks a lot :)
It only has to make sense to you. Keep expressing yourself!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Talfox

7 Years Ago

Yes, thank you! :)
Good writing becomes whatever the reader needs it to be... And this is excellent writing, my friend. The way you crafted this is amazing. And I especially loved the flow and rhythm. I love the way it becomes a bullet like rhythm like at the end of the second stanza. That was very creative. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Talfox

7 Years Ago

Thank you! ;)

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Talfox
Talfox

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Hello, I would think that everyone's interesting. Most of my writing is taken from given assignments. If not, it's a recent or reoccurring thought. Please feel free to leave suggestions and or comment.. more..

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