Atmosphere's Despair

Free Write as my first post. Sorry if it seems terrible

The moon watched

The moon watched

The moon watched as the sun began to dance

It

 danced

 around the Earth

The moon watched as the Earth's eyes lit up

Millions questioned gravity's ways

And while it all happened,

Yes, the wolf

The wolf cried out with flames

The Moon looked closer

The Moon saw the uncertainty in Earth's gaze

Oh how the Sun looked deeply for Earth's reflection

Slower 

and

Slower

The Sun was stiff with sadness

The Moon stared so deeply

that the stars became imaginary

The Sun wasn't dancing

It was only attracting Venus

Author's Note

Suggestions for me to edit or add?