Always You!

Always You!

A Poem by Anonymous Girl
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How someone feels when their loved one is gone.

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I turn everywhere,
To search for you.
North, East, South, West.
You are no-where.
Tell me, Tell me.
Where shall I take a glimpse,
In myself?
Where can you be?

Shout out for me,
And I will run towards you.
I'll give up my self,
Just for you.

My eyes create tears,
With you eternally filling them.
My heart pumps the blood,
With your name written on it.
My mind is entirely of thoughts,
With you always staying in them.
My mouth delivers words,
With you mentioned in them.

You are, you were and you will
Stay in me.
It'll be always you

© 2012 Anonymous Girl


Author's Note

Anonymous Girl
It just suddenly came to me. I don't know where it comes from but I just write it down.
Please review and comment :)
Point out any mistakes. Critiques are accepted :)
Enjoy! xD

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This is an agony of trust and loss. So well written because the tempo and syntax were wonderful. You feel her desperation and loss.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Anonymous Girl

12 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing :)

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