Always You!

How someone feels when their loved one is gone.

I turn everywhere,

To search for you.

North, East, South, West.

You are no-where.

Tell me, Tell me.

Where shall I take a glimpse,

In myself?

Where can you be?

Shout out for me,

And I will run towards you.

I'll give up my self,

Just for you.

My eyes create tears,

With you eternally filling them.

My heart pumps the blood,

With your name written on it.

My mind is entirely of thoughts,

With you always staying in them.

My mouth delivers words,

With you mentioned in them.

You are, you were and you will

Stay in me.

It'll be always you

Author's Note

It just suddenly came to me. I don't know where it comes from but I just write it down.
Please review and comment :)
Point out any mistakes. Critiques are accepted :)
Enjoy! xD

Reviews

[Brianna Van Zandt]

This is amazing. I have no words for something like this. Keep it up!

[Anonymous Girl]

Awww... Thank you :)

[Irvette Dauphine]

this is great.. like it :D

[Anonymous Girl]

Thank you :)

[Lost Howls]

Its a very good expression of what its like to be in love, infatuated and possibly even connected to your soul mate, very nice piece keep it up :)

[Anonymous Girl]

Thanks for review :)

[Cerise]

awww...very nicely said...i luveed teh end...:)

[Anonymous Girl]

Awww thank you :)

[Cerise]

:)

[Heather]

I loved it...you expressed that loss so well.

I felt this behind my eyes and in my heart.

[Anonymous Girl]

Awww thank you :)

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WAH! That's scary! I can't imagine what would happen to me if I lost my special someone! Well they were found in the end so that's good. yay!

[Anonymous Girl]

Thanks for the review. No they aren't found in the end.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Amazing poem....
exactly how I feel about a loved one too, when they leave...
great writing :D

[Anonymous Girl]

Awww.... Thank you :)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

You're always welcome :)

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I loved how u expressed yourself here truly amazing! 100/100 Loved it! :D

[Anonymous Girl]

Thank you so much :)

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You're welcome! :)