Always You!

How someone feels when their loved one is gone.

I turn everywhere,

To search for you.

North, East, South, West.

You are no-where.

Tell me, Tell me.

Where shall I take a glimpse,

In myself?

Where can you be?

Shout out for me,

And I will run towards you.

I'll give up my self,

Just for you.

My eyes create tears,

With you eternally filling them.

My heart pumps the blood,

With your name written on it.

My mind is entirely of thoughts,

With you always staying in them.

My mouth delivers words,

With you mentioned in them.

You are, you were and you will

Stay in me.

It'll be always you

Author's Note

It just suddenly came to me. I don't know where it comes from but I just write it down.
Please review and comment :)
Point out any mistakes. Critiques are accepted :)
Enjoy! xD

Reviews

[RachelReaper]

This sounds like if you made one of the stanzas a chorus and put a nice rhythm behind it, this could make an awesome song!

[Anonymous Girl]

Thanks... I don't know how to write lyrics... that's something about me :(

[RachelReaper]

haha, to me you just did :)

[Anonymous Girl]

Thanks :)

[Lily Mae]

Your sudden thoughts are phenomenal... excellent penning..xo :)

[Anonymous Girl]

Glad you liked it :)

[Sakshi]

love the construction of the poem, the way even desperation of search of someone is given beautiful meaning and words.
all the emphasizing of how the tears and heart and blood is, its amazingly apt. the words are strung very well together :) once i started reading, i could not halt till i was done. very groping.. :)
cheers to you..

[Anonymous Girl]

Thanks to you :)

[sierrasparks91]

love it
it has a good flow and written amazingly

[Anonymous Girl]

Thank you ^^

[Melodie. M.]

Its wonderful..it reminds me of feelings i once had when i lost someone..thank you for sharing. :-)

[Anonymous Girl]

Thanks for reading :)

[Erica Ross]

I can most definitely dedicate this to someone. It's like you know my story. This was excellent. Great job ! :)

[Anonymous Girl]

Thanks :)

[KKBatoretto]

Awww that's a really cute poem! Really emotional and sweet! Almost brings tears to my eyes! (Almost because I refuse to cry at happy stuff because you shouldn't cry at happy stuff XD) But anyway, really good and well written! Well done!

[Anonymous Girl]

Thank you glad you liked it :')

[KKBatoretto]

You're welcome!

[The dark story]

i liked the second last stanza a lot....it is really touching and the use of the beautiful imagery makes it more becoming.....the flow of the poem is superb too..nice work!!!!

[Anonymous Girl]

Awww thank you :')

[Yheela]

Very sweet, liked it very much.

[Anonymous Girl]

Thanks ^^

[Katherine Enma Pineappl..]

Such dedication is shown in the poem you have written. It's nice and shows intense dedication. Love the flow and directness of this poem

Nice write

[Anonymous Girl]

Thanks for reading :)