Always You!

How someone feels when their loved one is gone.

I turn everywhere,

To search for you.

North, East, South, West.

You are no-where.

Tell me, Tell me.

Where shall I take a glimpse,

In myself?

Where can you be?

Shout out for me,

And I will run towards you.

I'll give up my self,

Just for you.

My eyes create tears,

With you eternally filling them.

My heart pumps the blood,

With your name written on it.

My mind is entirely of thoughts,

With you always staying in them.

My mouth delivers words,

With you mentioned in them.

You are, you were and you will

Stay in me.

It'll be always you

Author's Note

It just suddenly came to me. I don't know where it comes from but I just write it down.
Please review and comment :)
Point out any mistakes. Critiques are accepted :)
Enjoy! xD

Reviews

[Abdur Raqeeb]

Simplicity at its best! The way you expressed emotions in the 2nd last stanza is just spendid. Great write.

[Anonymous Girl]

Thank you ^^

[Castonovia]

The ones that just comes to us are usually the best and this if one of them... glad you had pen and paper handy because this was so sweet and incredible, well penned indeed :)

[Anonymous Girl]

Thank you :):):)

[Sami Khalil]

My eyes
create tears.
Nice write.

[Anonymous Girl]

Thanks :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.

[Anonymous Girl]

:)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[Belinda]

I love that you don't know where the words come from. Its like you catch them in the air and write them down. I love this, the words are great. Poems are easy to write, but hard to comment on. They mean so much to the person, cause with poetry, they are about expression of feelings, and how can you say that someones feelings aren't good enough? this is amazing in any other word though. good job.

[Anonymous Girl]

Thanks for the lovely review :)

[The Invisible Girl]

I love this poem! Can't wait to read more of your work! :)

[Anonymous Girl]

Thank you :)

[The Fallen]

Aweh I love this poem :)

[Anonymous Girl]

Thank you :)

[The Fallen]

Your welcome

[John Phoenix Hutchinson..]

Excellent poem it grabbed me from first to last. Top work from someone so young. Very well done missy :)

[Anonymous Girl]

Thanks John :)

[Felicity's Eve]

Sometimes the best ideas just come to us and this poem is one of those best ideas ;D
I really like it :)
It also reminds me of 2 of my book characters

[Anonymous Girl]

Thanks for the review :)
And I think yeah it will fit for those characters :p

[Dr. Wood ?]

The instant ones are nearly always the best...when you have to write quickly before you forget....This poem describes that yearning for another so damn well...great stuff

[Anonymous Girl]

Glad you liked it thanks :)