Always You!

How someone feels when their loved one is gone.

I turn everywhere,

To search for you.

North, East, South, West.

You are no-where.

Tell me, Tell me.

Where shall I take a glimpse,

In myself?

Where can you be?

Shout out for me,

And I will run towards you.

I'll give up my self,

Just for you.

My eyes create tears,

With you eternally filling them.

My heart pumps the blood,

With your name written on it.

My mind is entirely of thoughts,

With you always staying in them.

My mouth delivers words,

With you mentioned in them.

You are, you were and you will

Stay in me.

It'll be always you

Author's Note

It just suddenly came to me. I don't know where it comes from but I just write it down.
Please review and comment :)
Point out any mistakes. Critiques are accepted :)
Enjoy! xD

Reviews

[Blissful Sin]

Even though its just on a whim you never cease to move me. Great job again, it touched me!

-Bliss

[Anonymous Girl]

Thank you Bliss :)
I will read your work as well.. I have been busy this month but now I am free I will find time to read :)

[Akashi]

Very beautiful. Excellent job.

[Anonymous Girl]

Thank you ^^

[Akashi]

You are most certainly welcome.

[Rahul]

Nicely penned, great write, IInd last stanza's great in reading and i really enjoyed reading this poem.

[Anonymous Girl]

Glad you like it^^ Thank you :)

[Rhianne Ney]

Another love poem on a whim, great one ^-^

100/100

[Anonymous Girl]

Thank you ^^

[Rhianne Ney]

YOu're welcome

[Acer]

I loved it. Dominant word's.

[Anonymous Girl]

Thanks

[Acer]

My pleasure :), your working way is too nice i'd say by your writing.

[Anonymous Girl]

Againa thank you :)

[Flutterby aish]

Nice one ... keep writing!!!!!!

[Anonymous Girl]

Thanks :)

[CreativeStroke]

Sometimes the pieces that suddenly 'come to us' are the most truthful of our emotions and feelings. I truly thought this was a fantastic write!

[Anonymous Girl]

Thank you ^^

[Sam Gregory]

It's been said before but this does have a nice flow indeed. Keep it up :)

[Anonymous Girl]

Thank you ^^

[Sam Gregory]

Np

[Damien Davison]

Very nice flow, very beautiful poem. It could be a song! Great job here!

[Anonymous Girl]

Thank you ^^
The problem is I can't write lyrics :(

[asdarkeyesclose]

'You are, you were and you will
Stay in me.'

there is so much positive energy in this it is almost electric! i loved the flow of language and the way you reached out to him. fantastic.

[Anonymous Girl]

Thank you.. I dont know where it did it come from but I just wrote it..
Thanks anyways ^^