Life Goes On...

We dream more than above.

We fly like a dove.

We have fun.

We have fights.

We smile.

We cry.

We scream.

We sigh.

But they don't know

That everyone is alone.

The truth is

Life goes on...

Reviews

[Rhianne Ney]

True enough, life goes on no matter what happens it won't end until we stopped breathing and we stopped doing anything at all.
I enjoyed reading this, great job ;D

100/100

[Anonymous Girl]

Thanks again

[Rhianne Ney]

You're welcome

[Patrick Henry]

....and in the end, we all die alone. Erasing faces and names as if by setting flame to records kept.... one by one. To quote Cobain and that crazy heavy metal dude from Highlander, "It's better to burn out than fade away!" This poem feels like a great poem to set the mood just right for writing more poems. I like it. I like all your poems, it seems!! xoxo -Mark

[Anonymous Girl]

Glad you like them.. Thanks

[Felicity's Eve]

This is very true...

Great job! :D

[Anonymous Girl]

Thanks ^^

[Felicity's Eve]

:)

[luviva]

yeh, proper ryt what goes on around us, does matter and sometimes we are affected by them!! but life still goes on. well written.

[Anonymous Girl]

Thanks ^^

[Sami Khalil]

We dream more than above.
Nice concept.

[Anonymous Girl]

Thanks again :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome .

[Anonymous Girl]

:)

[Acropolix]

Often there are moments time should slow down and there are also days that should pass very quickly, but in the end, it all goes on normally and we just have to follow life.

[Anonymous Girl]

So true... Thanks for reviewing :)