Nature

I love nature, so I wrote what I feel about nature.

You love it, don't you

The beauty and strength of it.

You love it

When you are no-where.

A no-where, where it holds you

Strongly to itself.

You love it

When you are alone with it.

You love it

And you don't want to leave.

The delicacy and force

Of nature.

The greenery, the plantation.

The waterfall, the living.

You just love it

And you don't want it to disappear.

It feels like heaven,

A heaven that is so tangible

So tangible that you feel attached to it.

And when you feel attached, you don't want to leave.

You don't want to leave it... Never and Ever.

Author's Note

I am crazy about nature and just so love it.
Tell me what you think about it.
Enjoy!

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

You're right. I love it!! I could picture my butt propped upon a stone wall with my eyes closed, just breathing long and deep.... that Spring breeze that fills the lungs so easily!! Beautiful poem.... : ) xoxo -Mark

[Anonymous Girl]

Glad you love it! Thanks ^^

[Patrick Henry]

I love all of yours. It was confusing to see why I'm not subscribed to you yet!! xoxo -Mark

[Anonymous Girl]

Oh thank you :)

[Abdur Raqeeb]

There seemed to be some elegance in the way you portrayed nature that really caught my attention. Perfect expression of the feelings of a nature loving person. Nice Poem!

[Anonymous Girl]

Thank you ^^

[RachelReaper]

I do love it and I'm really glad that you take nature as a source for inspiration. This made me feel very peaceful and I liked it.

[Anonymous Girl]

Thank you :)

[Westminster Abbey]

Yay! Finally a way to describe the way i feel towards nature! There's this creek that runs through our neighborhood, and I always like to hang out at the spot where it meets the woods in a small trickle of a waterfall. It's absolutely beautiful.

Great job! Keep it up! 100/100

[Anonymous Girl]

Thanks.. I love nature and if I am in a place like that.. I would never leave it!! :) thanks again :)

[Westminster Abbey]

Yeah me too.

btw, thanks for reading my friends book

[Anonymous Girl]

You are most welcome for that... I love that book and I am praying for your friend as well :):):)

[Westminster Abbey]

Thanks again. Best of luck to you! :)

[Anonymous Girl]

Thanks.. And good luck to you as well :)

[PurpleQuartz]

I never want nature to disappear!!!!!!
Great writing!!! I love the emotion in it.

[Anonymous Girl]

Thanks :)

[Lost Howls]

You hit the nail on the head, definitely expressing how people feel and hold that connection, when you are away from it, so to speak, it's that longing you have for it and I feel like you shared that in this piece. Love it.

[Anonymous Girl]

Thanks :)

[Junert]

Yeah never ever.

[Anonymous Girl]

True :)

[asdarkeyesclose]

'The greenery, the plantation.
The waterfall, the living.'

i love the feeling of freedom it gives you as well. i liked the original angle to this, nicely expressed very open feelings that let you just love nature without questioning. fantastic.

[Anonymous Girl]

Thanks for the review :)

[Rhianne Ney]

I love the nature to but sometimes fail to give it importance...
Good write (:

[Anonymous Girl]

Thanks :)

[Rhianne Ney]

Hi... I updated the book... and you're welcome(:

[Anonymous Girl]

Hi.. Okay sure I am about to read it :)

[Rhianne Ney]

thanks i finished Tsukin's book and I'm into yours...

[Anonymous Girl]

Okay.. :)

[The dark story]

of course..no one ever can run away from the sublime nature.and those who do.surely never experience the true satisfaction and calmness of the heart......the way you have described and expressed the soul attachment with the nature is sorely true..it is a really very pretty poem.........in my summer holidays..i used to go and study up on the roof .because i love that sweet fragrance in the sky...and those beautiful sun's rays.it all feel so relaxing...and i wish to go back downstairs,i can relate it that line repeated line so easily.great work!!!!!!!!!!

[Anonymous Girl]

Wow thanks for that long review :)

[The dark story]

hahahahahahah.i didn't wrote that intentionally.......can't help myself when i read something so nice like this.........

[Anonymous Girl]

Lol, right.