Touch

So wonderful,

Alarming,

Quiet,

Charming,

The touch of yours.

So natural, so...

I ran out of the words.

I don't know

How to explain this

Frosty touch of yours,

That tickles me,

Gives me butterflies.

It's subtle.

Its succinct.

The touch of yours,

So... magnificent.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Heather]

butterfly touches, shivers... yes, all those are wonderful touches of a new relationship. I liked this poem very much! Good write!

[Anonymous Girl]

Thank you ^^

[Rhianne Ney]

A good feeling about how a person can love (:
YOu're really a romantic writer based on genre...
Good write (:

[Anonymous Girl]

Thank you. I am not that romantic but I do know what does romantic means :p :)

[Rhianne Ney]

I know romance and write about it but I haven't felt it so I can relate

[Anonymous Girl]

Same here :)

[Rhianne Ney]

Well, birds with the same feather flocks together (:

[Anonymous Girl]

True say :)

[Rhianne Ney]

(:

[Anonymous Girl]

:)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Wow so sensual for one so young and inexperienced. Well written and captures such feeling. Love your stuccato style it conveys focussed sharp emotions.

[Anonymous Girl]

Thank you ^^

[Lost Howls]

Very nice, definitely describes what it would be like to touch the person your in love with, or even when meeting them for the first time

[Anonymous Girl]

Thanks and yeah that's true what you said there =)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

nice rhyming and a very good poem, please pop by and review some of mine when possible, I would really appreciate the feedback too. thank you.

[Anonymous Girl]

Thank you and yeah sure. Will do :)