The scent

The scent,

What was it? Perfume?

The scent, so splendid.

It was out of the world.

The presence of anything,

Won't change the oblivion.

Purer as a glass;

Like sky, so seren.

The two world's,

Can't change the merciful scent.

Author's Note

Please do comment :)

Reviews

[Helen Crutchett]

Thank you so much for contributing to Tovli's Ten contest with this wonderful poem. Much enjoyed!

[Anonymous Girl]

My pleasure. Thank you

[h0pelxss_y0uth]

OMG! YOU ARE AMAZING AT THIS STUFF!! I ONLY COME UP WITH QUOTES BUT THIS STUFF IS AMAZING!XX GREAT CHOICE OF WORDS..XX

[Anonymous Girl]

Thanks.. You know you should write as well.. And oh yeah I will send you a reading request... Read that book its sooo amazing!! Xx

[Patricia B. Hepler]

Yes, scents are most powerful in triggering or keeping memories living~ pat

[Anonymous Girl]

Thank you for reading ^.^

[h0pelxss_y0uth]

uurm.. im struggling my way around the site, any help??Xx

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Our senses in general are a very powerful tool. I like how you took the approach on underlying on the power of smell. Great job :)

[Anonymous Girl]

Thank you ^.^

[Cherrie]

the strongest memories are triggered by smell, I enjoyed your poem

[Anonymous Girl]

Thank you.

[Lost Howls]

I like it, I see a man or woman thinking about a person they cant see but can remember their smell, be it the perfume or natural. that's what I picture anyway.

[Anonymous Girl]

Yeah I guess you are right. I just wrote what came to me. Thanks for reading. =)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

a bold, 'stick to your guns' ' tell it like it is' approach, would be good to get a sence of what the scent smells like...any comparisons?

[Anonymous Girl]

Okay. Thanks

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I guess I am tired as although I liked the style I just didn't get it!!!! I would be happy to have you explain?

[Anonymous Girl]

Okay thanks. But honestly I don't know where it came from. I just wrote what came in my mind. I know weird but still. I guess its about someone who is deeply in love with someone that no matter how far they are they can still smell each other.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

That's ok so I am not losing my sanity! Sometimes it is a random thought or phrase that makes poetry so well done!

[Anonymous Girl]

lol, no you are not losing your sanity. I know, that's why i like poetry.