We all aren't equal..

We all aren't equal..

A Poem by Takuta

Hearing the rain pour on the ground. Your voice is the only other sound. The pain I caused. The pain I dealt.

I can't say I didn't like it. Quit being a whelp.

Accept your place. Acknowledge that my blade is in your face.

Bow down, or back down depending on your race.

I stand here not a man anymore. I stand not some little w***e.

I am superior, and that is how I am supposed to be. You can stand behind, or kneel infront.

Either way, I'll not hit you with something blunt.

Taking risks. Day by day.

Can't you just play my way?

If you truly cared.

The way that you dared.

Then you'll accept your place.

And stay out of my way.

© 2009 Takuta


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Takuta
Opinions, thoughts? I know..Not my best..But I did it to get revenge to someone who hurt me. Anyways, honest opinions, or none at all.

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Tas
WoW i wud not want to be this person, i cud feel the pain and the hate, its very powerful and i makes u wonder wat is this person talking about...really nice and if it is not your best it is really good tho.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Brillant! This is a very thought provoking, and powerful piece.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on February 12, 2009

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Not specifying that., OH



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About me? Well, Takuta is obviously not me real name. Though that is my part of my pen name that I am going to use. I like to stay pretty anonymous about things. Though, I am seventeen, male and a Bis.. more..

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