Dreams in Thunder

You could come down like rain

If you chose to

Your disturbingly dangerous

To my existence

You kissed me insane

Because I was a fool who let you

You caught me by surprise

I wasn’t expecting your arrival

In my life and I won’t deny

You give me butterflies

Now your bane is essential to  my survival

You just kiss the girls and make them cry

I’ve fallen

And I am in over my head

If I allow myself feelings I condemn

My soul to more pain

Possibly more than I could bare

My veins already been ripped open

I’ve bled

A lifetime and now I am left for dead

No one said life would be fair

Still, it’s better if we never start this

I’m no emotional anarchist

Just a girl whose been burned

Your confidence has me feeling jealous

I just lack the same so I insist

I’ve been here before and I’ve learned

Please walk away for I am feeling rebellious

Just standing close to you

Rush with feelings I can’t explain

Who knew?

This beautiful dream you’d create

Just being you�" coming down like rain

Falling on my window til I’m finally awake

sb 2011

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem told a hard story. I like how the girl handle her emotion.
"Please walk away for I am feeling rebellious
Just standing close to you
Rush with feelings I can’t explain
Who knew?"
Desire and common sense never fall on the same page. Easy to believe in story and dreams. I like the ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Robin]

love the open honesty in your writing ..

"I’m no emotional anarchist
Just a girl whose been burned"

and a great title

[Jack]

Hi there. 'You kissed me insane' is certainly the most gorgeous line I have ever read. I like this very much; happy and sad alike in places; highs and lows. The sweet life eh? Wonderful work, thanks.