Ode To The Guy Of My Dreams

this is for someone...

 

Ode To The Guy Of My Dreams

Perfect in every way,

He makes my days turn from bad to great.

When I talk to him, something feels right,

And when I hang up with him,

The rightness is gone.

Yet I smile in my sleep,

While I think of him,

And I cry when I can’t talk to him.

And even though we’ll probably never be,

I believe that I can still dream.

 

 

His giggle is adorable,

His voice is calming and smooth,

And when he’s upset,

I love trying to make him giggle and laugh.

 

I think we may just stay friends,

Though I’m still in love with him,

And that’s why I wanted to prove it,

So I wrote this ode for him.

I really want him to see,

How much he means to me.

Reviews

[unlovedpoet]

who ever you wrote this for........would be a fool not to notice you great job ...lots of emotion and honesty

[Nathan Noble]

very emotional and honest. sometimes emotions like that can be hard to convey but u did a great job.

[Lorraine]

Your special someone is lucky for you to write a poem for him. While this about a very typical topic, I like the way the words flow with honesty. Thanks for sharing this here. I know it's not so easy to share something that has truly come from the heart. This is one awesome read. It's very sad but it makes me rejoice in the power of true love. Great Job.

Keep Writing. ^___^

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I know exactly how this feels. Im feeling it right now. Its nice to see my feelings put in words, written so beautifully like this. Great Job!

[Dr. S. D. Blankenship P..]

Thanks Janeene, V.V